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Beautiful, the ryhming was good, i feel too much ryhming can get out of speachless!

This storybook should be locked and shunned from society itself. It is a discrace to the halo franchise. It is copywrite infringment to say the least. an admin should delete ...

Name: Dani Age: Unknown Gender: Male Race: Shard Rhyme: London Bridges Appearance: Short, skinny, long black hair with red streaks, sharp fangs like a vampire. Black eyes, wearing Personality: Mean. ...

As Jamel kept running, he recognized someone! "Evil, is that you?" Asked Jamel. "Yea, we need to go out and search for the other, they should be close by, we ...

Jamel finaly came out of the portal. It seemed like ages inside it! "Who the hell are you! What are you doing in my house?" Asked a man. He was ...

I walked towards the door. I knew I would be late, but at least I could get there before the doors close. I've done that before! I had to climb ...

I walked towards the door, it had no door knob so it opened easily, there was someone there, staring at me, almost as if she knew me. I walked towards ...

Yea i agree with Kal and Alex, there isnt much conflict. He is just killing and killing and nothing else, if anything its a diary. But the idea is great, ...

"Well i guess we should trust him..." Said Senna. The ground started shaking again, more violently this time. "Im thinking we have to..." Replied Jamel, stepping towards the portal. It ...

It is a good story but i feel no connection with the characters. It's very bland and you dont explain anything. How did they loose the freighter? Many questions like ...

"Wait where did that Demidrake go?" Asked Senna. "Im not sure, i think he flew away." Said Jamel. "Demidrake? There was a Demidrake here? Where did he go? Tell me ...

Laney stepped towards Aro. "Is he ok?" She asked. "I dont know..." Said Lethero "Ill be fine, go...on...without me." Said Aro, using the last remaints of his strength.

*Yea but im where some are, just like 2 groups*

Aro stepped foward towards one of the humans that yelled at him. "You shall parish for the pain and suffering you have caused this world!" Yelled Aro, rising 2 inches ...

Jamel stepped forwar. "Yea, what is it going to cost us to get off this planet?" He asked. "Or more importantly, how are we going to be leaving? Can we ...