deaducky8

Yeah I noticed that.. I didn't mean to, any idea how to delete the other one?

Oh dear, I think I've been insulted. Ask me if I care.

Ok, leeches, I'll take your silly advice. Except the black rose.. she annoyes me to no end. Also, Gods is staying Gods, what if I believe in more than one? ...

There, fixed and added lines. Happy?

Getting better? I've posted all of my poems at the same time, why does everyone say I'm 'getting better'?? In any case, I know it's short, I didn't want to ...

1. It is a song, who needs punctuation? 2. The Black Rose, ("I respectfully disagree with your opinion," is what you should have said. Flaming is not tolerated. -Grif.)

The flame that surrounds me Like the fire in your eye Burns all around me In the crimson sky The pain that hurts me The hurt that won't stop So ...

When I was a girl My mother would say 'Don't say mean things in the rain For you can't predict the day' When I got older I remembered what she ...

I know I know I wasn't really into this one when I wrote it (I tried, really I did) I was in the middle of class (heh) But thank you

You can tell me how to fix my work when you write it. Thank you, Goodnight

I know it is child-like. I wrote this piece when I was ten. It's a bit scary when you think about it. I mean.. Why was I thinking about things ...

Oh? And how do you suppose I should change it?? By the way, would you like to take a guess as to what she is?

It’s late, I enter to an empty house. Cold...alone.. I head up the stairs, no one. I grab a drink from the kitchen and walk to my room, Then I ...

Gods how I love you so much And I'm itching just to feel your touch I want you to have my soul my flesh and blood But you've left me ...

In a dream that I had It was just you and me It was dark all around And clouds filled the sky A light flashed above Then a crack split ...