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deadrose

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Journal of Time

    Interesting start, I have some nitpicks though. (1.) 1st paragraph had found himself awakening more and more frequently - awakening should be waking (2.) you talk about age and time ...

    Dec 22, 2005


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