dead_poet

OOPS I meant laura. Drucella is looking at Jack! Sorry about that.

welcome to yws! Im new as well so we can figure out the posting stuff together.

Cuz my first name is ashley

Name: Rani of The Far East Age: looks 18 Race: Vampire Appearance: Long black hair, piercing blue eyes, 5'7, and is always wearing black leather. Bio: known in some parts ...

*This looks fun* Name: Drucella Age: 300 yrs old but look 20 Gender: Female Appearance: (in file below) Race: Vampire Interests: Jack London I peered at the stranger, who had ...

Hey welcome to yws! I'm new myself. If you ever want a friend feel free to PM me.

I like it. This piece defininately has some potential. I loved how you added My Chemical Romance into the story to describe the billy kid. The fact that Melanie and ...

Thanks for the welcomes. I write romance and poetry but I think I mentioned that already. My favorite author is Sandra Brown. I hope you will check out my posts.

I like it! That was a very clever way of putting the bands together.

NOTE: I'm new to the site and this is the first thing I have posted of my work. I've never had someone critique my work before so please feel free ...

Hey welcome to YWS i'm new as well.

I enjoyed it. Personally, I thought your descriptions and mood of the story went along perfectly. I hope there is more and I hope to read it.

I think the story is pretty neat. I loved how you described each character. It did seem as though you were rushing through the chapter as if you had to ...

Hey everyone, I'm dead_poet!!! My name's ashley, I'm 20, married to the sweetest guy in the world named Anthony, have a dog named Toby who is like our son, and ...