davidg

Poetry and lyrics about depression are everywhere these days. Seriously, there is so much of it around. So there isn't much point in writing those kind of poems unless you're ...

It's a very nice theme but the 9 out of 11 lines all rhyming doesn't agree with me. I agree with this. Also, the word 'you' is repeated a whole ...

Sorry, but I don't like it. It seems very generic and risk-free. Maybe you could try writing a longer version, then cutting it down till you are happy with it?

I agree that 50 Cent should not be name dropped in this. Most people consider him as a joke, and his flow is pretty pathetic. You could use Mad Skillz, ...

Bitch is used when describing males too in a lot of hip-hop. Its a derogatory term regardless. I'm not huge on this lyrics, they don't seem to have a good ...

If you want something a bit different you should listen to some freak folk. Joanna Newsom is a good place to start.

I have a screenplay for Death Proof signed by Quentin Tarintino :)