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Re: A Redneck Thanksgiving
Absolutely love it really good not really rhymey but then again i guess it has to be. the picture goes with it really well the best part is that it's ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter Four: Cole
another really good chapter and in all honesty i haven't reviewed anything cuz there's nothing to read but this is good and thanks for the points. i have made a ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter Three: Zephyr
well hi again i can't find anything to review because it's hard to find good writing online so another good chapter!!! I liked it a lot. the length of the ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter Two: Cole
Okay im just gonna say i need a few points i hope you don't mind if i just drag things out a bit, i personally find almost absolutely nothing wrong ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Chase - Part 1 / Chapter One: Zephyr
One of the few things I've been able to read on this site I thought it was very interesting, i like the way that the chapter is not too long ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: David Echoe Short story
David Echoe walked through the debris. Old York was gone, Atlantis in its place. He walked over the top of a bank vault, money, blowing in the wind. David looked ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: The Collector (Prologue-Chapter 3)
Okay i just need a few points so if you don't mind i really only have a few things to say but im gonna drag it out just a bit. ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: A Minor Apocalypse
It was a good story but it really in the end was kinda (not tryin to be discouraging or anything) but it was really just kind of dumb, though i ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Shadowed Tracks Chapter 1 (Tracing Shadows)
Like the idea, the character names are a little far fetched if not too hard to read, kind of a dull ending. You might wanna try describing the area around ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: David Echoe Chapter 2
Just so you know this IS an action adventure novel. i just haven't come to that part of the story i will try and do my best of getting action ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: David Echoe Chapter 2
Dust rose up behind them as they walked, boulders were everywhere. Hills rose and fell, it was almost noon. Steven led them to a shady spot next to a small ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: THE CHRONICLES OF ALLAN DEVANT -The Lost Words
i thought it was good. sounds interesting. some grammar problem's i noticed if you proof read it, it might help. If your gonna go for a cliffhanger or whatever, if ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Hook. Chapter 1.
I think everyone else covered the editing so i'll just say really good :)
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Eyes Like The Ocean
i don't know a lot about poetry stuff but that was really good i enjoyed it a lot :)
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: The Immortal Enigma -Prologue
Sounds interesting i'm curious as to see how the rest plays out
Nov 18, 2011