davidechoe13

(P.s. This is kind of a spoiler to my novel :) "Okay well,the first one is we get what people we can and then little b little we might be ...

"i really-" Mudd was interrupted as David barged in. "What are you thinking? I didn't really take you for stupid but," David paused and let go of him " look ...

"It's probably apparent that i am NOT The brains and i've got the sword but nothin else and on people including you, if you join two."

"Well," Mudd said, he really had no plan other than go out and kill bad guys, now he reckoned would be a good time for making one. "I plan on ...

Mudd had come up with a plan,a brilliant plan. He got his new sign out and put it on top of his tent where everyone could see. It read PUTTING ...

"Oooookay" Mudd said as inched away, "wait a minute!" He remembered she was the girl he was gonna ask to join his group! He looked around and just caught a ...

The girl was gone she just walked off and disappeared, Mudd sighed and headed back towards his tent. A group of soldiers ran by, Ignoring him, they hurried off and ...

John Mudd wandered around, having no real place to go he just wandered. The base camp for the resistance was small, fitting only a few thousand, Mudd found himself at ...

pretty cool, sounds very interesting though why is it rated 16 or whatever?

it was good i honestly just needed a few points and i just pointed out something or it wouldn't really be a review :)

okay a good piece i honestly haven't read the others so i dont know whats going on, so i noticed you sorta switched from past to present every now and ...

Okay, good news; sounds interesting,not too long not too short. bad-ish news: some grammar stuff in their and i really ad no idea who was the main character up until ...

okay,good news first. I thought this was very interesting the idea and everything is good, i dont know what your plans for this are or anything but i think it ...

David was packing his gear, trying to make his sleeping bag fit into a stupid role that would fit in the little ropes. He growled in annoyance as he still ...

i don't know if you have another meaning for this but i think it is MUTINY if that's what you mean i could be wrong but you know. I thought ...