david2oo8

I love the second picture its really cool Bit creepy but i liked it :) Very good work

The first two i think are just brilliant The image of just the moon is fantastic, as i the image of the tree its got a very dark feel to ...

I thought it was really good I liked how it was someone reflecting on their past instead of the usual teenage moaning lol It really reminds me of my mum ...

Over the weekend I didn’t see much of Steve as his schedule was always so hectic it was hard to get any time to spend with him. All I kept ...

Thanks and i will review the next chapter before posting it And about the "I" thing all the time i do agree its a bit repetitive. I think i will ...

I really like this picture Very calming and peaceful. I really like how the clouds are gray and not white it gives the picture a darker feel. The image of ...

I did like the story but i thought it was very long to read I would shorten it down a little maybe put it in chapters with cliffhangers at each ...

As was said im not a fan of reading lyrics but this was very well done I dont know what kind of tune you were thinking of in your head ...

Thanks for the review Yes i do agree its a bit predictable but it does get a little more unpredictable later on (As the complete story is already written)

Thanks I blame my spell check for those lol

I woke up gently the next day, Steve was no where to be seen. I quickly pulled on a pair of trousers and went downstairs to find him. I crept ...

Thanks for the comments and yes i am gay I will try and describe the setting more, but for me when writing it has always come secondary to the characters ...

Thanks for the review In later chapters i put periods in but not always so i will put them in before i post the other chapters Thanks again

Chapter 2 - Please leave Feedback As my mums car went speeding past house after house I could only think of one thing, Steve. My mind was so completely indulged ...

Chapter 1 - The Classroom As the bright picturesque sun lit their face I found myself mesmerised, I had never experienced a feeling of such an idealist nature. Our eyes ...