david2oo8

Part 2 James spent the next few days in a daze, he was unable to comprehend exactly what had happened. He and a few of his friends had discussed this ...

Thanks for that. I did realise that it would be a love it or hate it storyline, it was just a story i thought could be good and its not ...

Ok so i guess its a no for this story then lol.

This is a story that i am in two minds about continuing so i would like some feedback to see if its worth me continuing. Any and all feedback is ...

I liked it, its an interesting concept and i must admit one i haven't read too many of. I liked the characters, although its short and there wasnt really that ...

Bar means except So that line would read except the odd look or ..... Im guessing its the fact i write in British English thats causing the problems with things ...

This was meant to be the last one but it does continue Only thing stopping at the moment is the fact i have no points left and will need to ...

After a week off school David decided that he should finally return, with his new sense of confidence and his mother support he thought school should be no problem. Well ...

Way too short in my opinion. It was okay but could have been so much better if it was expanded again, as i already said. I liked it for what ...

I really enjoyed this story and it is very intriguing. Cant wait for the next part of the story. :)

Being less than 5 days away from an exam myself i can completely relate to this poem and really liked it too. I do agree with the other post that ...

Thanks for that :D

David ran and ran, thinking of nothing and no one. “What had changed?” this one thought was ringing in his head. Without Stephen he didn’t want to go on, he ...

All the paranoid thoughts of what would happen and what could happen all built up in me until I couldn’t move let alone speak. I felt sick, so severely sick. ...

I liked but I have to ask: since your name is david2oo8 are you david in the story? No i couldnt think of a name so i just put my ...