darthsythious

I like the begining when she comes outside into the town, it is a nice discribtion of the town waking up. But, when Ruslan comes seems abit rushed and Amarie ...

I like it, very interesting. I would like a better discription of this mysterious stranger though. I hope he comes back later, i think he will but that is again ...

It is a very nice began but I agree with Dream of the Faith above when he said that you gave too much background. I say that you wait and ...

Hey, this is chapter 11, the most recent chapter i finished, i am starting with this because i dont have my first notebook, so i dont have the first like ...

Chapter 11: The Sailor’s Daughter “I’m Seflee,” the girl said. “Nice to meet you!” Izek quickly projected, hobbling forward to shake her hand, “I’m Izek, and this is Saken and ...

Well thank you all for the warm welcome. I am glad I found this site, it is gonna give me something to do in my spare time this summer. But ...

Hey, my names Jonathan, but most call me Jon. I work at a supermarket and I run every once in a while. I am 18 and I actually graduated 2 ...