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Re: Oh my god
I touch his soft red rosy lips, Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and stokes my cheek, All handsome kind and totally sleek, His eyes ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: This Is It
And there it was found. A once strangled hope cried out, I now know I cannot live without; Without who? For from your eyes spirits sprout, What else is there ...
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Re: Hate Loves You
In this world of darkness , In this world of pain ; there is one who is always here for us. [s]it is hatred[/s] This line just doesn't fit. Hatred, ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: The Hypno-Anti-Writer's Block (ha ha)
When I go to bed, I can't fall asleep 'till 3-4 A.M. so I don't think it'll work, but nothing costs me if I try..
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Words
I wrote this off the top of my head; I haven't edited yet. I think it is one the the greatest poems I have ever written so I rushed to ...
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Rhyme...all the time!
So..you're telling us that words GREAT and NIGHT don't rhyme??
Mar 25, 2009 -
Re: Moving on
When cruel sorrow brings the silence of tomorrow have the sense What were you trying to say: "the sorrow brings the silence of tomorrow" or "the silence of tomorrow have ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Young Destruction
Black fire[s]s[/s] paralyzed their eyes. Their presence [s]there[/s] disturbed none, a simple change in the wind. He cringed into a small corner, face spurted with dark mud. These chills questioned ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Demon of Night
I wrote this for Incognito and the Dreamwalker's Claw Against Fang contest. I don't really like the last stanza, so if you have any ideas for it, please share them. ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: What Are We?
What Are We? As the young listen to what is told They lose their virgin light and grow old What's virgin light? It is now too late It has succumbed ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Three Weeks
Are you watching me tonight? Can you feel the pain in me? I lie with my cheek against ice As tears drip on the linoleum . Where did you find ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: BOREDOM
B y clear skies liberty flies O r else desire slowly dies R andom letters and numbers E rrors and questions and slumbers D ay by day anxiety sighs unlearning ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Water and Glass
Where water and glass meet My world falls apart Nice picture, but still..how can your world fall apart where water and glass meet? The tainted water that touches his lips ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Greatest Illusions
3. My Name is Gibson I am a guitar , electric at that. My arteries and veins are strings tuned for carrying my mellifluous blood that is a melody. Too ...
Mar 22, 2009 -
Re: Seasons of Ice || His Eyes
II. [s]Then [/s]this descent is what they meant by fall -- You don't have to put "Then", even if it's the second part. The poem sounds better without it. a ...
Mar 22, 2009
