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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Oh my god

    I touch his soft red rosy lips, Trace the pattern with my finger tips, He grins at me and stokes my cheek, All handsome kind and totally sleek, His eyes ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: This Is It

    And there it was found. A once strangled hope cried out, I now know I cannot live without; Without who? For from your eyes spirits sprout, What else is there ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Hate Loves You

    In this world of darkness , In this world of pain ; there is one who is always here for us. [s]it is hatred[/s] This line just doesn't fit. Hatred, ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: The Hypno-Anti-Writer's Block (ha ha)

    When I go to bed, I can't fall asleep 'till 3-4 A.M. so I don't think it'll work, but nothing costs me if I try..

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Words

    I wrote this off the top of my head; I haven't edited yet. I think it is one the the greatest poems I have ever written so I rushed to ...

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Poetry Tutorials Re: Rhyme...all the time!

    So..you're telling us that words GREAT and NIGHT don't rhyme??

    Mar 25, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Moving on

    When cruel sorrow brings the silence of tomorrow have the sense What were you trying to say: "the sorrow brings the silence of tomorrow" or "the silence of tomorrow have ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Young Destruction

    Black fire[s]s[/s] paralyzed their eyes. Their presence [s]there[/s] disturbed none, a simple change in the wind. He cringed into a small corner, face spurted with dark mud. These chills questioned ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Demon of Night

    I wrote this for Incognito and the Dreamwalker's Claw Against Fang contest. I don't really like the last stanza, so if you have any ideas for it, please share them. ...

    Mar 24, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: What Are We?

    What Are We? As the young listen to what is told They lose their virgin light and grow old What's virgin light? It is now too late It has succumbed ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Three Weeks

    Are you watching me tonight? Can you feel the pain in me? I lie with my cheek against ice As tears drip on the linoleum . Where did you find ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: BOREDOM

    B y clear skies liberty flies O r else desire slowly dies R andom letters and numbers E rrors and questions and slumbers D ay by day anxiety sighs unlearning ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Water and Glass

    Where water and glass meet My world falls apart Nice picture, but still..how can your world fall apart where water and glass meet? The tainted water that touches his lips ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Greatest Illusions

    3. My Name is Gibson I am a guitar , electric at that. My arteries and veins are strings tuned for carrying my mellifluous blood that is a melody. Too ...

    Mar 22, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Seasons of Ice || His Eyes

    II. [s]Then [/s]this descent is what they meant by fall -- You don't have to put "Then", even if it's the second part. The poem sounds better without it. a ...

    Mar 22, 2009


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci