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darko.demark666

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Forever On A Bridge

    Hey God! When you come to poetry, it would be best not to mention times or dates, or the amount of time passes. It just screws up the whole timeless ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Silent Tears

    Behind the smile is a dry tear ... Dry=harsh Behind a strong saying is a weak girl. Good, but if you have strong saying why are you weak? Behind the ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Christmas Longing

    Did you know: Charles Baudelaire was the best (for me still is) at his spleen. He also put together all of senses in one and he is great for many, ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Passion's Vicious Presence

    Fighting our passions oh so fleeting, Still I dread the thought of our meeting, good verb Drenched in sweat, my heart fast beating, huh? We are blinded by lust, quickly ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: Test

    Every time I see you When I saw you I get fear in my eyes, Try: "Fear glinted in my eyes" my hands get sweaty, no way and my head ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The thorn on my rose

    I trace the petals with adoration, and pray that this beauty will never cease. But when I hope that such splendor, such glory will never expire , i do not ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: I Drew a Smiley on my Knee

    I drew a smiley on my knee, because life needed happier things. My knee looked so plain, and all knees look the same. You could see the smiley on my ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Forever On A Bridge

    Two stand on a bridge, away from the world. Midnight has gone, four hours, or more. Try for hours and see if it fits. So it becomes "more of a ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: the callousness of newborns

    Tormented by the winter chill, a scattered skeleton that hides its bones in the rooms where collisions used to happen, when the music played notes that shattered hearts, digs graves ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: When you smile

    I was reluctant to post this so please let me know what you think. When you smile, you remind me of a cliche of you and I... ...of happier days. ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Christmas Longing

    [quote="Incandescence"]To those no longer present. After the beloved is dead. After the personal history ends History never ends. It's just getting bigger with a glassy-eyed over, it's been, says a ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: P.u.r.i.f.y. The D-day

    okay i'm not a huge poem fan really, but anyway this didn't make an ounce of sense to me. Where the heck does D-Day fit into this. im a huge ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sister

    [quote="Ducati"]You are so substantial; you fill up their hearts and my face is darkened by your shadow. I am so fragile flitting in the wind, your hug holds me down ...

    Dec 22, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: You Are Loved

    Hello, my friend, I have your present here. I’ve been making it for Christmas this entire year. Did you really write it entire year? If you want to give a ...

    Dec 21, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Black Water

    [quote="Suzanne"] Black Water I tangle myself in the net of life while trying not to drown in its waters . Perfect I tread waves weakly , tied down by anchors ...

    Dec 21, 2008


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