darko.demark666

What second draft???

You told me it was fine You said I’d be alright And with you there at my side How could I follow the night? Why not fight instead of night? ...

We had one case of giving poem for Christmas present already... Never mind...I'll say the same thing...If it's from your heart then it's OK (Yes, you can write that you ...

You have so much potential and the best thing about it is that you are using that in the best way you can... Outrageous unique and original "thing" you wrote. ...

Welcome to YWS. We hope you like our concept and the whole idea of this. If you have any questions feel free to send me a message... ~ I know ...

See, now here's the thing... Haruno said: "Your rhythm is corny." I say it's terrible. You actually ruined(or wounded) a perfectly good poem. Not just good, but great poem(if we ...

See, now here's the thing... Haruno said: "Your rhythm is corny." I say it's terrible. You actually ruined(or wounded) a perfectly good poem. Not just good, but great poem(if we ...

I listen heavy metal too. Actually I don't, I feel heavy metal. But my philosophy about war isn't quite the same as yours. I'm total opposition of war propaganda. People ...

You sure get a lot of reviews...but I've got to say that I read your other poems and they were much better (for my taste)...

to take a sparrow, to fly a leaf, to live a life in disbelief great to make a crane, to see the light, the final blow in the final fight ...

P.S. You can find some good poetry here also(with reviews :);))... I found some pieces that can easily be compared with some of famous writers. Also see Suzanne's "guide through ...

Jesus, you sound mad... ??? WTF? :)

See, I don't know what you're flying towards and how is flying going to save you from anything? Well said! :idea: :idea:

Shreds My heart strings tugs as I remember you. WOW! Why is it I can only write my poetry in the peak of [s]the[/s] moments of falling in love with ...

Soul Forms I nominate this title as the most innovative (original) on YWS. I am the soul-supporter, here to comfort your mighty spirit as you rise to the future greatness ...