darko.demark666

Poems don't have to rhyme. Sometimes when you rhyme too much the poem goes bad. I agree with you, but that was something between rhyme and nothing. He can make ...

Welcome to YWS. I remember those days When we were together. We held our hands and we promised- We'll always be together, We'll never let go, We'll always keep on ...

What fool Icarus for trying to be a man too long while clinging tight to his boyish bravado. Unworthy of his wings he’s too far gone, too high on pride ...

Welcome to YWS! Sorry, but this is total cxxp.... No rhythm, just scrabble of words and nothing more. Your verses are "hitting" each other (eg. Hand in his --warm-- Warm ...

I just got to say: free verse-definitely. Why do you need last verses of each stanzas in one(or two-that makes the whole thing more confusing) words?

Tomorrow doesn't matter 'cause we are caught in endless time. Lies that we tried to scatter aren't worth us more than a dime. We can only dream now and transcend ...

Hahahaha...nice...I liked it... These politicians really make us unhappy with their fame of being rich and successful cause they're...nothing actually. Onto your work: 1. I loved the: Title,style,genr

.....I'm not sure of this....I'm a fan of rhyme so I don't like your poem. 2nd, you have nice thoughts, contrasts, comparisons and metaphors but without that you got nothing. ...

Nice stuff.....I like the theme ... 1st stanza 3rd verse: stand between anger? How can you stand between one thing? 2nd stanza 4th verse: Nice caption with "Power", but tie ...

Mighty hand of God crashed down scattering faithful all around screams cut through the dark and gloom echoes from the massive tomb What happened to the commas, fullstops,...? Eden destroyed ...

Can an angel be of leather hide? without question Or does divine lend exclusive path? Why shan't an angel brave the raging tide ? what does it means? question mark ...

I think that your concept is a bit much of it....this doesn't belong to poetry for its style... I mean, this ruins your rhythm totally...actually there isn't any rhythm... This ...

Nice (really nice) poem... I noticed too many words that have similar meanings like Snoink said "dance"...also what does the title have with the poem actually??? R'n'R is very good... ...

Wow....How many historical persons...and all for nothing... What is theirs role in this poem??? You put lines as you wish so it don't make sense. Also, why are you using ...

1- Has no meaning 2- Plenty of rhymes, but useless in meaning. 3- Not to be offenseive, isnt called poetry, It's called 'rhyme as much as you can' xD ~ ...