darko.demark666

Hello! First-the repetitions-not so much of a good thing here...The repetition "bring, bring, bring..." is(my opinion) quite good, but the whole stanzas??? Your poem belongs under the lyrics section w

Well, it's wasn't funny...actually, you make a big moron out of yourself...;)

you don't need punctuation... I can't believe the people criticizing you for not having it :@ I just suggested that s/he expresses his/her thoughts in a stronger way. It works ...

The three verse stanzas are a bit odd like the others said. Actually, I said they are a little bit strange when you connect them with the four verse stanzas, ...

What is this forum turned into??? The moderators really need to do something. Go fight somewhere else!

Lol...poetry isn't words spilled on a piece of sh...paper...

I couldn't agree more with you in some things you said here... I don't know is it a review needed here.... ??? They think as a group? haha..nice said... I ...

Punctuation is screaming....

*This is my random over the top with metaphors poem. Enjoy!* This is my story something...;) I'll write it like I please period. It's my fairytale and my tragedy period... ...

Hey there, I had a feeling that you are hitting me with words.... like you're just saying something to me that nobody wants to listen... Too many words, too many ...

...represents a time when you're not in contact with your family cause they don't have e-mail... ...when you have to put a password for your microwave...and silly things like that... ...

I wish you wouldn’t look at me that way, With lust in your eyes, As you slowly examine me. I wish you wouldn’t lick your lips, As you look at ...

...Ihave better picture somewhere but I think I lost it...or deleted it...

*Another miserable poem... *sigh* oh well, that's the way I am. Dark and depressing :D. Please review!* Drenched in my tears My heart drowned in pain. My thoughts are useless ...

dear God, I'm feeling dark inside, and small and hurt and weak inside. I need a place to crawl and hide: a safe, still harbour at your side [s]where unknown ...