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Re: The Good Die Young
Cheer up little one, don't be [s]too[/s] sad. Instead of your fate, think of the life you once had. I'm sorry for the abrupt, AN unexpected ending. I know how ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
You also said that the title to this was "Idiotic boyfriend" but why did you write about a "she?" Now I could understand if maybe you were feeling upset about ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia
Phobias What do you do? Without question mark here When I smother you? Phobia , Phobia , Phobia ! This stuff here makes me think this belongs more in a ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: The nature's call
Edited! Thank you very "nice"...haha...oh..Evi
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: The nature's call
Behold! Behold the beast for It is the nature's prince. Behold! Behold the creature that makes the psychotic wince: Fearless demonic eyes and claws that unwind. Careless for the men ...
Feb 25, 2009 -
Re: Fire
So, this is for Rosey's Contest: I stared at the red flames dancing on a silent beautiful melody, period could use better here It's warm battled the freezing night, It ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Shattered
For Rosey's contest . Touching THE sea and touching THE light, dancing through a breathless night, or restless night separating something fright'ning from the carpet where I stand. 'Round me ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia
Just because....lol... funny guy u r...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Phobia Phobia Phobia
Yeah...if you want humor you can jump to forum and search for it. It has a lot of funny stuff. In case you didn't notice, this is were "boring" poems ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Idiotic boyfriend
Inside every writer is this unrelenting passion that refuses to stop existing. Every time we write we need to tap into that source of passion. ever heard of Baudelaire? He ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Funeral Pyre
You upload your works in your portfolio by creating maps, like eg. Lyric poetry or lyrics or fiction... You simply select the picture for the map and just reload the ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: photography 5.. i missed you (stay) by lisa loeb
I loved the third pic the most cause of the colors... and reminded me of a sin city... But I have something bad to say... Why are you on the ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Feeding Time
Good morning, sunshine ! I’m feeling warm today and I think It’s got something to do with the Subtle glow of the faint words Which rest on the translucent screen ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: Stained
Lovable and foolish at the same time... You have a great sense for words...you're like Shakespeare-totally. But this rhyming scheme is to difficult to master. Really, it all seems so ...
Feb 24, 2009 -
Re: The End (or Scenes from Armageddon)
I'll be quick... -"Repair" your punctuation. -correct the cAPS in the beginning of the sentence after that -stretch some of your verses and skew the others... -make sure the rhythm ...
Feb 23, 2009
