darko.demark666

" I banish you to whence you came from!" Why is this in apostrophes? You got 2 "you." I don't even know if that bothers me... ;) I smile, for ...

Thank you both for your comments. Thank you for posting. 3. I'm sorry if it sounded egotistic to you. I wasn't actually talking about myself. But I can see where ...

Hello, I've been searching for old poems and I found yours with just 1 review....I' ll give a shot: Should I write a love poem Since it's Saint Valentine's day? ...

I I stand here living. I stand here dying. I am walking. Where am I going? I am human. [s]Right?[/s] The proper verse would be: "I am human, right?" but ...

Welcome to YWS... We once were like one, ; ---> : We shared everything. Together, forever, Our love was stuck , but now it's undone. This really pops out of ...

Written when I was 12. VERY messy.XD go on and murder it. My 12 year old self somewhere will understand. ------------------------------- Written down on thin , white snow, thin snow? ...

This'll be quick..everyone said this is great...I share their opinion.. There's only one single candle placed in the middle of the cake and it wants to be consumed. The guests ...

Rated R for dark subject matter, and insinuated rape. Carry me; I want you to carry me on. Take me higher, make me soar. There’s nothing here for me anymore. ...

A Vampire's Touch The Sun shined so very , very bright, It's rays provided such a beautiful sight. We sat on a cliff No comma here... Which overlooked the sea. ...

I wanna fly away to a place never before seen . Why did you inverse that? It works just fine in a normal placement. I wanna be the first there ...

Hi, me again...... On a lonesome night Wintry, crisp – remote Tumbled notes of faith From an inky cloak. As the frost-buds dropped On the slumb'ring loam Well done. All ...

Welcome to YWS, a world of confusion, pain and happiness... I have a li'l demon in me, li'l isn't correct... it roars for freedom. It wants out. I cannot keep ...

Hi..and welcome! Casper here.....I'll review your work.... ....what? ...ok, ok... :) Let's sit here in nature and watch those birds bash their heads against the trees. Here you have two ...

oh, idiotic boyfriend..are you pertaining to yourself? :lol: ...but i don't understand this: And I say she was just an idiotic boyfriend. how can you call a girl an "idiotic ...

Hey, buddy....how are you? Saw your poem I don't know where so I read it...and here's the review...not much of it..lol Splinters Shattered into splinters, the shards of my heart ...