darkdove

i like this poem its like nothing i've read before.

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i like them alot. they are really gorgeous!!!! it makes me wish i was there. its actually inspiring me to write something. its awesome.

i liked it espaecially the twist wasn't excepting it. i did think it was your dad. i disagree with M.B too i liked how it was something different. i also ...

its only temporary.

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i like it, it was alil cliche but its cool i mean i know how you feel in the poem

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i like it,sort wish there was more to it. But itsvery very candid. i like thoguh

her death is more of a metaphor.

revisisons have been made!!!!

i liked it, it was to the point and it was sad. its a good poem :)

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i liked it, its very symbolic. i think it w\means something else. anyways i like it