darkdove

i actually love number 5! it remains me of a hippie road trip for some reason. your awesome.

i like it. maybe you fear you'll lose him and it well hurt alot because you like him. Maybe your friend just happens to be the one you tld about ...

Its suppose to be like that its parallel structure. I like it the poem don't change anything.

These are fantastic!! I love them there like muses for the eyes!! IT gives me ideas, just love these pictures. You are really talented. Words can't express how these pictures ...

i liked it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love how you write its amazing. Its like i was pulled into the story. I felt snow everywhere..this was awesome.

thanx everyone for your comments on this piece.

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thanx i do it was just in a bitter mood...its out my system go on to things that matter thanx for posting.

I love love love the fourth one, I mean they're all good but the fourth is my favorite. It reminds me of some hotel room in the sixties where some ...

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the first one reminds me of this movie i saw, its not a bad thing considering the movie was amazing. it had flash backs that resemebled something of what you ...

i like it because it remains me of some indie drama...but i don't get it either but thats what i like about it. I just need to read more to ...

i like the character picture, her eyes really drawn you in. its like is where its suppose to be.

i like it. its like if Panic! at the Disco did a rap song. its cool.