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Re: chapter 1: Wrong place, wrong time
Intense! Are you Kyle? That English teacher sounds strict. I wonder why Mr.Callahan only got the note? I hope you explain how the killer (that just appeared out of nowhere) ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: Nothing Rhymes With Purple
That was cute! it had a nice flow and consistent beat. I liked how there was a twist and fuse of Dr. Seuss in the Purple poem. It's seems to ...
Oct 22, 2008 -
Re: An end
I really enjoyed reading this: the story line was carefully thought out, it was well written with suspense, and I could really feel the tension Peony had. I really liked ...
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: Inspiration, or lack of
I like how it was inspiring us to write more, in a writing piece. It was deep too. I liked how you and a lot of people use "___ is ...
Mar 5, 2008