dark_angel

Okay, I have a real problem starting stories, so I'm just writing one on the spot for the beginning to be critiqued. You are welcome to give constructive criticism for ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your work today. ^^ For starters, this is an amazing piece of writing! I was just scrolling along the front page, ...

Izzy James was a boy of few words. He never talked much to anyone, but when he did, whoever it was appreciated it greatly. Everything he had to say was ...

Hi Macs! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ On the contrary, I think this is a wonderful piece of writing! It may need a little ...

Hi, Archer! I'm Dark Angel, and though most of the things I had to say are above, I thought I'd put in my two cents. >.< Anna, Alyson, and Hannah ...

Sorry, it's kind of long, but Chapter One is very short, so I included Chapter Two as well. ^^ Let me know what you think. ---- Chapter One As Rising ...

Hi, Beemarie! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ So, to start this off, I definitely agree with jMin here. The lines don't need to be ...

Hi, Xavier! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. (: So, to begin with, I thought this was amazing. It perfectly describes those pointless crushes on the ...

Cast: Jainy - teenaged girl. Tobias - teenaged boy. Darren - teenaged boy, twin of Jainy. Setting: Rooftop balcony of Jainy and Darren's house. Time: Evening/twilight. ---- (Lights up on ...

Hey, Helen! I'm going to critique your poem today. ^^ For starters, this is an incredibly emotional piece of writing. It just sucked me right in and made me think. ...

Cast: Boy - teenaged boy. Girl - teenaged girl. Setting: Girl's backyard, in the trees behind her house. Time: Midnight. ---- (BOY walks in, looks up at the house; he ...

I actually wrote this when I was bored one time, so it may not be my best work, but I think it's all right. Let me know what you think. ...

Well, for starters, I think this is an amazing short story. To pack so much detail into one very short composition takes talent. So, good job there! I'm going to ...

Wow. I don't know what to say. That was so incredibly intense, I felt like melting off my chair! Even the simple filler sentences were somehow deeper and more meaningful ...

Hi everyone! I'm new too. I'm Dark Angel... you can call me that, I guess. Or maybe Angel for short. Whatever, I don't care. ^^ I'm 15 and I'm mostly ...