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I haven't been here for so long... So I decided to try something very different than my usual stuff. As anyone who reads my regular stuff would know, I'm usually ...

Hey everybody, thanks so much for commenting! :D Okay, so I'm going to change a few things here, due to the comments and recent revisions of my own. Again, I ...

A poem I wrote about the modeling industry in America. It's a bit disturbing, but very real. Inspired by the documentary, "America the Beautiful." Enjoy! ~~~ Black lace gloves A ...

Thanks for the reviews, everyone! I will definitely work harder on this story and add a little more depth to my characters. And sorry about the length. I kind of ...

Hi again! :D Okay, the only thing I have to say for this chapter is that I was really confused with the dialogue in the beginning. Nathaniel was called "Nat" ...

Hi there! I must say, this chapter seems to have been written in a hurry... there's a lot of detail packing without much filler. I know that's been said by ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today! ^^ So, I have a few things to point out about this. All in all, I agree with ...

Oh my gosh, Meep! Another exciting addition to this story that I would TOTALLY read if it was on a shelf somewhere. I'm following this so avidly, I'm beginning to ...

Thank you both for the review! I'm very flattered that the almighty administrator is commenting on my work! *blush* According to your comments, I've changed a few things. I'll list ...

Here I am again, lying on the ground with hands over my ears, making a feeble attempt to stifle out the sounds of the world. Inside my head, a cacophony ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today! :D So, to start things off, this was a very cute piece of writing. There are a few ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. ^^ For starters, this is a wonderful piece of work! It left me speechless at the end, just ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your poem today. >.< For starters, I'm not going to nitpick every little thing I find, because this is a VERY ...

Hi there! I'm Dark Angel, and I'll be critiquing your story today. >.< So, for starters, that was a wonderful beginning! I saw it on the front page, and it ...

Aww! That was so adorable! It takes me right back to fifth grade again, waiting on the sidelines for kickball. Hehe. :P Just thought I'd put in that I think ...