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Re: Classroom Epicness
It's good but kind of random. It's not super interesting, which is a story killer. My dislike: 1) To me, this really had no purpose. Unless it has a secret ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Vengeance
I really liked this! But please fix the title spelling, it's killing me...unless it's on purpose. Now for my dislikes: 1) Some awkward breaks. I think the review before me ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Coffee Elves
I liked it in general. My iPod decided to play Last Kiss by Taylor Swift, though, so that may intensified the likability of this story. I didn't really get what ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Soak Up The Sun: Chapter 1: Sun Rays
My dislikes: 1) Why didn't Mitchie just slap Georgie across the face as hard as she could? Honestly, if she hates her that much , then why hold back? 2) ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Terrace Chapeter One: Physical Detriment
I honestly couldn't follow this story most of the time. Maybe if you developed it a LOT more, and stretched each action or scene out MUCH longer then it would ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: devoured
As a general overview, I really liked it. I like your basic style. :] For my dislikes, here they are; 1) The breakages were weird. As in: we have honey ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: the lone witness
This is great, by the way. It's like a sucker punch to anyone who has watched something terrible, but they chose not to do anything. torn and scared,she ran into ...
May 28, 2011 -
Re: Princess Of The Sand Castle
This is really beautiful. It seemed to me like the girl was frozen in a state of cracking walls in her head. As in, she has constructed a fragile, but ...
May 28, 2011
