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dancingclouds

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Falling

    hey kayyo! first of all I really do like you poem! I think that if you had the first few lines Quote: Falling down Further and further, Deeper and deeper. ...

    Apr 14, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: The glare

    The Glare You glare at me I glare back You turn on your heels Glare, still deep in your eyes But I know, you are deep in thought Every time ...

    Apr 9, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Piano

    wow this is brilliant!! "Keys like darkest midnight and brightest dawn" has to be my favorite line! keep writing!! heres a gold star! Roxy

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Darkness

    i really liked this poem- theres alot of fealing in it...i even had to ring my friend and tell her about it and she loved it-and she can be a ...

    Jan 27, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: brave one

    [b] Brave one[u] Below the huskey moon you lie You don't take a breath And though it seems impossible You thought us how to be brave And how not to ...

    Jan 26, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Hi! My name is Roxanne but you can call me Roxy. I am new here. I love music and I am quite crazy and silly although most of my poetry ...

    Jan 26, 2009


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