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Wow. Thank you people for the help~ I really appreciate it. XD

Wow, nice chapter... But, I think you can get more points if you post it... not edit it and paste it in there... Anyway, thats a cool new chapter (Poor ...

Yay-ness! Finally, a Naruto fic! Okay, I was in a state of awe. That is cool. And I also noticed that people here are more into OCs... some communities actually ...

Well maybe you can just ignore the fact that I said present tense sounds awkward.

I made this one up when there was nothing else to do. Basically I was killing time... I didn't want to be long, but it ended up that way. I ...

That's a nice plot actually. Writing from a journalist's point of view and probably falling in love with Super Boy or... Jason. Maybe if you could fix some parts and ...

I love it, it's so nice! I agree with Atariel-san, the repeating title is kinda cool. Loved it!

Maybe if the rhyming was alternate, that woulda work. I like the angsty-romance in this one too. And I love the last line: And make our future colorful instead of ...

I really like your imagery, but somehow the words you use doesnt seem to work... The lines are too long, so its very hard to notice the rhyming at the ...

Ninja-san, nice plot! The prologue reminds me of the intro in starwars! lol! I'll keep in touch with this one! Hey, porferatorxhearts-chan, you love avril lavigne do you? lol.