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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Part one - Blood on the clock

    Hi, The idea is good but you do keep tense switching. I think you should continue with this, perhaps redraft it on account of the tense switching, and weave in ...

    Apr 16, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Walking Dead

    This is amazing! Striking imagery and great rhythm :)

    Apr 16, 2010


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites