daisyeansell

This is the content of an apiphany that occured on the 19th of November 2009 whilst walking back from Spar in the night and the rain after buying tobacco. I ...

I think the story has lots of potential, and in that I think it's very good. The grammatical errors are a bit frustrating when reading, also some general comments: "It ...

When all of life is darkness, And I can't find a glimpse of light, When troubles seem unending, And hatred clouds my sight, I try to think of you, And ...

Intense. Reading it feels like drowning. I think the line "on the sign was written in white ink "Rest In Peace", but the sign itself sighed, said "Rest assured, no ...

I think this poem is great, how ever I have to agree that the first stanza is very choppy. Reading out loud while you write helps with this - its ...

When death hath found me at long last After many a year passed pleasantly. When all of my alotted time has come to pass, -So long as it is not ...