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Re: Monteray
great suspense at the end. im guessing this takes place somwere in the future? please add more ill be looking for it
Mar 28, 2012 -
Re: Just like a teardrop.
I love it. I can feel the emotion in each line. I also like how you compared it mostly to a teardrop. i could feel the pain and struggle. overall ...
Mar 28, 2012 -
Re: Amidst the Chaos
i love it. i think its got good structure. it starts off intresting and ends perfectly. i could feel the emotion through the whole thing. nice job.
Mar 27, 2012