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Hey! Thanks for this. I will fix the bugs, I'm actually changing certain things. Like the beginning and end. I want to make a way for not being so repetitive ...

Hey! Shot thanks for the review ill fix the bugs and pm you. I really did like the harshness :) keep in touch :p

wow!!!! Love it :D Does Matthew know she had the baby? the sentence where you're thanking God, its FOR, not FPR :) thought I'd let you know, slight typo from ...

Hey there :) I just wrote this after I had a dream about it, dont know where it would fit in a book at the moment and still working on ...

thanks guys for your reviews... i really appreciate you for taking the time to read my work. I do agree that it needs to be more specific but i did ...

it's a great poem, feeling for the bugs though :lol: and sounds like you have a good imagination pm me when you post anything new

i guess i should work on my punctuation and my rhyming skills but hey its my 1st rap and I'm learning from my mistakes

wow that was an awesome yet funny script. the imagination used to create it was strong and wild :) keep on posting then