cyndaday95

these are pretty good

i think this is a very good poem but the only problem i have with it is that the topic should have been explored more but other then that good ...

i think its good but the only problem i have is that it seems a bit choppy, but that was probably what you were goin for

My name is Cynda Day. I am a sparrow trapped in a golden cage. I think people should make love not war. I wonder what my life has in store ...

Running,jumping and flying as i speed through the forest. I run to try to get away from the wounds you just inflicted onto me. Sadly i know i can not ...

Life is a long road. It has its obvious beginning and it inevitably stops on a dead end. Along this road, you will have some breakdowns, some crashes and you ...

all i have to say on this matter is that this poem is really good keep it up!

I long to be free. To just fly away, to soar over the colorful tree tops of orange and red. To float past a bright full moon on a deep ...

Somewhere Somewhere out there a life waits for me. Over the rolling green hills speckled with golden rod and the sharp snow tipped mountains it is there. Beyond the shinning ...

hello my name is cynda i think you did a very good job on this poem because what you discuss is so undeniably true you dive deep into the heart ...

that is a good poem , my only problem is that you were not very descriptive, you got your point across yes but you maybe could have been more descriptive. ...

For some love is hard to fall into,but for all, it is harder to fall out of. Falling out of love is a painful transition from joy to despair, from ...

Green is the color of nature. Green is looking out over a vast field of grass swaying lightly in the morning breeze,thinking that it looks like ocean waves on land. ...

Hidden Hidden is my life Who I am, what I am is hidden. To hide is to be safe. To be safe is to be secure. To be secure is ...

Inside I cry Inside I weep,but that is only on the inside. It is never allowed to escape the confines of my eyes, for if it does there would be ...