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(secrets) on the thorn my finger falls a drop of blood as dark as night is when I’m all alone hiding from the falling rain silver moonlight silver rose darkness ...

Thanks everyone--I really appreciate your honesty, as I've shown this to several friends and they haven't been any help at all as far as real feedback goes. I probably won't ...

Following my Heart (through seasons of despair) My hope shall die with the Roses, in the spring bright and fresh and full of fragrance A single melody in an orchestra ...

This is such a cool poem—took me three readings to completely digest it. Love the last two lines.

I like this... the only thing, as was already mentioned, is your use of "apart", which i'm assuming you meant "a part". The fourth stanza (Will you find me?/I'm lost ...