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Re: Night Music
play on daughter of the moonlight play through the night play on your gleaming white piano unblemished unstained uncorrupted pure and clean unlike you play until your fingers can play ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: sometimes, i pretend my life is a movie.
Thanks for the critique--I don't usually write with any form in mind, and this just came out as is. Normally I only write poetry, as I start to flounder with ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: sometimes, i pretend my life is a movie.
sometimes, i pretend my life is a movie. or a book, or a scripted play, or a musical. the day you notice me we will dance in choreographed swirls and ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: Controversial Issues
Thank you all for your comments! :) This was more of a spur of the moment poem, something I'm hoping to develop further. I used lots of quotes from various ...
Jun 10, 2007 -
Re: Controversial Issues
I. Yes, boys and girls, we came from a rock. you share a common heritage with earthworms. there is no right and wrong and don't bring guns to school, don't ...
May 25, 2007 -
Re: uncertainties
Every other line was supposed to be indented. X( it didn't come out, and it seems a bit choppy now. w/e. tell me what you think.
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: uncertainties
uncertainties I do not know who I am. (I do not know who I'll become) or if I'll become anyone for that matter. I do not know if I will ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: my valentines wishes
i know haha! i like your avatar... reminds me of a poem my friend wrote, called "Cake, Not Hate". funny stuff.
Mar 17, 2007 -
Re: my valentines wishes
thank you all for the lovely comments! this was just a sort of brain-dump kind of poem, and is actually a part of a larger compilation of thoughts, (which is ...
Mar 17, 2007 -
Re: The Art of Looting Heaven
I loved this stanza... Don't you ever wonder how it works? As if to every man the gods gave but five words of beauty in their lives, and deep inside ...
Feb 21, 2007 -
Re: my valentines wishes
my valentine wishes i would like a bouquet of poppies. red poppies. or multicolored poppies. with butterflies in them. butterflies and stars inside my multicolored poppies. butterflies and stars and ...
Feb 20, 2007 -
Re: consolation
Yes, that was exactly what I was trying to get across. You learn to live with sorrow in the same way you learn to live without wings. Do you have ...
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: consolation
consolation sorrow is something you learn to live with like your fingers your teeth your wingless spine
Dec 22, 2006 -
Re: Butterflies
butterflies I want to be the girl in dusty victorian blues, sitting lonely on the fence, dreaming music, wanting you. There are things I remember that I am afraid to ...
Dec 19, 2006 -
Re: Butterflies
butterflies I want to be the girl in dusty victorian blues, sitting lonely on the fence, dreaming music, wanting you. There are things I remember that I am afraid to ...
Dec 19, 2006
