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cyancheshire

  • Other » General, General Re: Darkness

    I really liked this. I really did. If it's what I'm thinking, are the demons representing depression? If I'm just being clueless, I'm sorry. =P She's alone and she hates ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: alone

    I love poems that give emotional and personal appeal. They're very pleasant to read. There are a few mistakes, I think. But there is a light At the end of ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Blues Man

    I really loved this! It has a kind of mysterious feel to it. Just the name sucked me in. I think you should be just a tad more specific as ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: No More Judging

    The message of it was amazing. I love things like that - that show those kinds of messages where it just leaves you in awe and you're just like, "Wow. ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stardust

    I really like this. It's so straight-forward, and I love the story in it. I've gone through a situation like that before, where we were just best friends and considered ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Math...mwahahahah

    I absolutely hate math with a constant passion, so I can totally relate to this. This was very well written, and I love the little "alas!" and "-indeed-". Those two ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: On Going War

    Wow, this poem was very vigorous and emotional! I love it. It's confusing, but in a good kind of way, like it's a mystery or something. I love how there's ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: I cut myself

    Oh wow! I really liked this. It describes it so well. I've had experience with cutting; my friend did it, and she had no idea why she'd do it. This ...

    Jun 30, 2011


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn