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OK...classy capatain whatever..umm, in real books, their prologue explained the characters. Apparently, I'm that kind of author that explains the characters in their prologue. And maybe you'll underst

I found a few small grammar mistakes,but, it was good other than that. I think you should have more decription though. And even though her eyes are grey, that doesn't ...

Hi my name is Myesha and I'm new to YWS and I'm liking it so far. I have been writing every since I was like, 6 or 8 years old. ...

most the grammical problems were solved.I liked it,yea it was good and I like the fact that she is blind. Good story, I think you should keep writing.

well, it was good except that it needs more detail. I agree with love,juliet. How do they look? How long have they known each other? Give us more details because ...

well, i understand, I will on chapter 1 because this is just the proluge

The way love moves Proluge "Daddy, daddy!" Six-year-old Aleeyah screamed. She lived with her mother but her dad visited once in a while. Kelly didn't like to see him. Well, ...

*Give Love a Chance* By: Myesha Chapter 1 Lisa sat fingering her bagel. "How could this have happened", she thought. They were so deep in their love, she thought they ...