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Here it is. Have fun and don't hold back. Thanks This is chapters 1-4 so far. When I post more, it will just be added to this one, at the ...

thanks a lot. I'm new to the whole writing thing, so your tips and corrections really help me. I'll keep all of them in mind. :D

I think I'm going to be rewriting this novel. I don't like the way it's going so far

I only really hated one book and that was Eva by . . . someoe. I'm not sure.

1. Harry Potter . . . J.K. Rowling 2. Enders Game, Orson Scott Card 3. Enders shadow, Orson Scott Card 4. Chronicles Of Narnia, C.S. Lewis 5. Romeo and Juliet, ...

Is it still too rushed?

Still unsure of where she was going, Rose continued on. She could hear Will's breath and footsteps behind her, which comforted her. She was still so angry and frustrated with ...

Ok, I think I added a bit more, for the liking of others. Please see if you like it. Thanks Oh! If you have already read the first half, just ...

I appreciate all of your constructive criticism. My story, like I said, is not finished yet. I will take the advice about spelling and about telling about the village. I'm ...

I think I found a fitting title, In a World Unknown. The story is not complete, actually, not even close. I wrote that little section off the top of my ...

As she slipped past the bakery, she thought about Mercicio. She didn't love him, her father did. He wanted their money, not for his only child to be happy. "I ...

This makes making a character easier, thanks.

I'm new, but I don't know anybody. I love, love, love; love, etc, to write. but my mind is blank.

that was interesting and sortof helpfull, thank you Zeera! :lol: