curiousvampire

Ha,ha! I loved this, its really fun and down-to-earth. Some off my friends write stories like these, so I'm used to critiquing these type of books. It was unexpected and ...

I like the beginning, it was started with action and ended with more supense. You had me at the edge of me seat and your setenes flowed nicely together. Your ...

I see potential in your composition, but I also see mistakes and I advise you to listen an incorporate what Fading-dreams suggested. I have to say I liked it and ...

Great story, sad beginning and ending. In other words I loved it. No huge errors that The New Hero already pointed out. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, becuase I ...

I'm a huge 'Harry Potter' fanatic and I loved this piece. Thank You for the read and the hard work you put into this. Good Job!

I have to agree with Shubhi, I've never seen such unique characters.They were brilliant and vibrant. I liked the voice you portrated in the narrator, the datail of events was ...

Can you spell perfection. It was simple and beautiful I liked the love/hate thing going on and it tickeled my funny bone. Please write more!

Looking for a reviewer, well you've come to the right place. What I will review Fantasy fiction Romance(Anything no matter how explicit it may be) Science Fiction Fan Fiction Action/Adventure ...

Well, I didn't spot any errors in this piece, so I guess Meep, Isha and Esme already covered them. I loved all your chapters so far, there all interesting and ...

Okay I've read the prologue which was solid beginning, leaving me wanting more. This chapter was a great foundation, supporting the prologue. The structure and descriptions were carefully planned out ...

I liked it. Your story was simple, but powerful in a sense. I wish you had more detail in your MC.

Hey fix, I'm your reviewer for this night. Your story was clean and edgy; no grammatical or spelling error to be seen. It was odd and humorous, especially when she's ...

Authors Note:I have decided to put a halt to both of my stories, I do have a few chapters ready to go though. I'm most likely going to post them ...

Horray! Spledid work, it was really cute and dynamic. Plus it was real.I liked this chapter its so simple and creative. I enjoy how you described how unnatral Andrew felt ...

Welcome Kim, I think this is just the place for you if you want supportive criticizing for your book.