curiousvampire

This sounds awesome :D I wanna join! I call the dog because its what I am in the animal zodiac and it I know it well. Name : Noah Xavier ...

Aloha Sophie (yea' I speak Hawaiian *lies terribly*) Nice to meet you and I love your name by the way. Also I hope you settle into the YWS okay.

Yay! I'm the first to welcome you! Hey NeveyBerry, nice to meet you,I'm curious by the way. You love writing about vampires and Fantasy, me too. This is a great ...

Too me, it really wasn't all that intersting in the beginning, it was pretty much a drawl til like the very end. Again more mistakes, so tiny and miniscule yet ...

okay, this was scary amazing stuff! I enjoyed, but I suggest you reread again, because I did spot a few minor mistakes that stuck out and slapped me in the ...

I see a ton of potential this story, but its short and I seriously wanted more. All you really gave me was descriptions, little dialogue and background. Add more, so ...

I rarely ever come into this forum, but the title sparked my interest and the first sentence sent me into a trance to keep on reading. It was really good ...

That was evil :evil: But I can't stay mad at you :lol:

Thanks for the reviews! I'll update as soon as possible.

Amazing in every refined detail! A great begining to hopefully to a great story to unfold.

to eat him, but using his...

I'm loving it! It was finely written and up to par. Wierd and intriguing, you hook me by the first sentece alone. Thanks for the read Crescent.

Harry Potter remenise. It really reminded me of Harry Potter, but I have a feeling its going to be different. Pm me please when you write more. Thank you for ...

Its good. I like, but its a little too fast, you skipped their entire life to adulthood and I wish you had a little more detail with descriptions. But all ...

Wow! News flash, it went from playful sexual humor to grief, great transition. This chapter was excellent. There were no erros this time and I liked it as much as ...