curiousvampire

Pesonally I thought this was great. Your MC has a good personalty and I like him. All in all it was interesting except you had a few mistakes that I ...

Hey Nikkilow, my name is Curious and I shall be you reviewer today. It was okay, and your piece didn't really have any errors. But what bugged me were the ...

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Hey SunSetWest, nice to meet you. Italian huh, that's so cool. I always wanted to go to Italy, but it hasn't happened yet. Anyways hope you enjoy it here YWS! ...

I wrote a new story and I'm still not sure if I should keep or ditch. It's a romantic fiction called if anyone would be so kind, please and thank ...

This was so cute and imaginative. I read it to my baby cousins and they enjoyed it to and ordered me to give it a like no matter if I ...

Awsome chapter and I appreciated the history, it really help to understand what's going on a lot better , so thanks. Now errors: they were a few and, but nothing ...

I'm still unsure if I should keep my story, its called Mistress and I wanted to know what you think. Please and thak you.

Okay, its longer and you have a few mistakes. Like a few punctuations missing here and there and some other odd bits and ends that need to be fixed. So ...

Okay, Ive already read you guys story and reviewed so who's next?

This was seriously otherwordly and magiacal..... dude you totally blew my mind with this piece. They were no mistakes that I spotted and the coposition was solid and sweet. Can't ...

Welcome fellow writer, hope to see more from you in the forums!

Hey Shubi, I'm here to review at yous request. Sadly, I'm late and Isha pointed out all you errors already. I wanted to do that :cry: . Oh well I ...

Yahooooooooooo! Its longer now, but you had a few errors here and there. Like: In you you first sentence,instead of sat , its sitting. I saw it twice and they ...

Awe struck and daze, this was actually good. Good job!