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Re: Pirates of the Caribbean: The Waves of Jaws
Bravo, Aspiring you captured Jack perfectly in this composition. This was good and humorous in other words uplifting. Thanks for the read.
Apr 15, 2010 -
Re: Master Keever and the Mystical Clarinet of Doom
Hello eab 10, nice to meet ya and welcome to the mystical world of YWS, hope you like it here so far. On to the review, okay this was good ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: I Never Should Have Followed
Hey babymagic18. thanks for the review so here's one in return. Okay you had few mistakes that forest already pointed that I advise you to follow. Now the only problem ...
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Chapter 7 to my werewolf story!
Whoa! This chapter was well WOW. I can't think of anything else to say , but hurry post the next chapter please.
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: Novels & Novellas (updated)
Nate your so awsome! *Bows*
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Lovely New Member
Welcome Chelarose, couple quick questions: who's your favorite author and book and what's your favorite genre to read and write?
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: The new boy part 2 of chapt 1
Okay first off this was seriously way to short second it was one huge chunk of unreadable mess- use paragraphs you have space- third it gave me no affect of ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Darkness Descending
Wow, I would have never guess that you was a new. This was really good for only novice. Your first paragraph is what really reeled me in. Your sentences were ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Fairytale No. One
Hey, welcome Shadowlight to YWS, I loved your story. It was great actually. The mistakes you had that Kadee and forestqueen pointed out was the only things that bugged me. ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey Maise we have itlooks like we have a lot in common, I love to read and write romance too. Hope you settle in okay. And I'm also JK Rowling ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Not Too Bright...
Welcome Fizza I really liked your story, it really gave me an insight of what goes on in the mind child who has autism. Welcome again and thank you for ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Sneak Peek: "Hate"
Oh...goodie this sounds good. You should definitely post the rest.
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Surfs up
Name: Korie Takei Gender: Male Age: 18 Where your from: California Appearance/ picture: Cute_Purble.jpg Appearance/picture: Picture0001.jpg Personality: very neutral and laid back most of the time, bu
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Surfs up
My very fist storybook ever! During the summer your working at the most popular hotel on Hawaii called ' The Sunny Shores Beach Resort'. The only reason your actually there ...
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: At your service!(BACK FOR BUSINESS)
Please review my vampire story It titled 'In the Company of a Vampire'. I would provide a link but I'm too lazy to that so just go to my portfolio.
Apr 12, 2010