curiousvampire

I liked this, it was original and interesting. It looks like it might be love triangle between Mikey, Tyler and Cara being in the middle. Or at least that how ...

First off let me welcome you the site, I'm curious and shall be your reviewer. Second this was I won't lie but truly visionary, original and brilliant on all levels. ...

Welcome, Atticus- I love your name by the way- I hope you have a good time here on YWS where all your writing dreams come true.

Hey Aspiring! Chris Redfield and the infamous Jill Valentine are my favorite characters in the Resident Evil Series- I have most of the games and all the movies - so ...

Hey random! I won't lie to you I read the first chapter and it was pretty good and this was great also. Your writing style were very vivid, but not ...

I'm finish, finally! okay these two chapters were great. I'm really happy that Kara told Ayden the truth and everything, plus it Kara finally gave into her feelings for Issac ...

Okay, I guess we'll begin, but were still accepting. :) Korie I took a seat on the bench outside the airport, far away from the others- the flight wasn't long ...

Mistakes and comments are in red and/or in bold. Could n't this day get any worse ? I don't didn't feel like myself anymore until not since that day I ...

Hahahaha. You got this idea from that show 16, now didn't you? Did you mean the surfing one? Because 16 is at the mall I believe and then the other ...

Come on, we need more people, at least six to seven to move to the actually start the storybook, please join! Everything won't be about surfing or working manly teen ...

So sweet and yet so sad. This was great actually, but your tenses are jumping all over the place so that makes me not fully love it and like roe ...

Welcome Yusshin! You write fanfictions I do too sometimes. Mainly Kingdom Hearts(I'm obsessed with that game), Final Fantasy and a few others. See you around the site sometime.

Hey Winter, welcome to YWS. You love Johnny Deep! Me too, I have almost all the movies he's been in, my fave being Pirates of the Caribbean. You also love ...

It's been long since I last posted my chapter. Hope you enjoy it. Reviews welcome. I have started with the second part of the chapter but I don't have time ...

Wow! I enjoyed this! It was very descriptive and mind-bending. Thanks for the read!