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Re: Cataract Operation
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Re: Little Popeet: The Lost Child
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Re: Tablado Boys: Episode 1 The 2-hour Lateness Rule
My main advice would be to get straight in with the action. Who are the characters? What are their motivations? What are their relationships with one another? You need to ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: No name once again
I thought it was very interesting that you decided to write such a short poem, but if you're going to write one that short you should make sure there's plenty ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: The Blazen Chapter #2 (revised)
I thought this was really good but you should have developed the character of Callie more. Also remember to use correct punctuation in speech, e.g. “CALLIE WAKE UP!” should be ...
Oct 2, 2011 -
Re: Trouble Came to the Turnip
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Sep 28, 2011