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Re: The Legion, Chapter one, Page two
In the view of the eyes of William Goldberg came a magnificient spectacle. An island full of lush green trees that seem to spring to life as if they were ...
Sep 28, 2010 -
Re: Into the Abyss
Thank you both. It's good to know that I could improve this to make it a better peice. To retrodisco666: It's okay, I can take critisicm.
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Into the Abyss
Into the Abyss we go. Where we end up no one knows. Hopefully sometime we'll make it through. Hey man I sure hope we do. Be quiet do you here ...
Jun 30, 2010 -
Re: Elevator Heaven 1
Thank you all three of you for the amazing reviews. I've taken in all the advice and have considered this story strongly to become a short story or novel. Congrats ...
Jun 28, 2010 -
Re: Elevator Heaven 1
I once watched a man who saw god. His eyes were full of hope and determination. He would never stop, and he would never falter. He crossed the highest mountain, ...
Jun 16, 2010 -
Re: The Legion, Chapter one, Page one.
Thank you three for your nice and helpful comments. I greatly appreciate them and hope that of the same will come my way.
May 4, 2010 -
Re: Train went over the edge, Pg.3
"Three twenty-nine, three twenty-nine, three twenty-nine." was the same thought that was cycling through my mind as I raced for the elevator. The keys to my office were now jangling ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: Splash of color
Even though Ranger Hawk pretty much gave you all you needed to improve this story to you, I just stopped by to tell you that I enjoyed this story quite ...
Apr 29, 2010 -
Re: The Legion, Chapter one, Page one.
Chapter 1: Welcome to the Island! Page one. The waves on the ocean were being pushed and pulled by an ominous and strange presence, they tried to balance but couldn't, ...
Apr 23, 2010 -
Re: And the World Laughs with You
This is really deep and emotional(of course). So I just wanted to say that this is very interesting and well worth the time to read it. Have a nice day ...
Apr 22, 2010 -
Re: High School Revenge
Hey man, I remember seeing you write this and I just wanted to tell you that I am very glad that you have recieved such great reception. I hope more ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Now Introducing Featured Works To Your Profile
Very awesome, and I'll make sure to make good use of it!
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The YWLJ 2010 Volume: On Sale Now!
Being a recently new member, I would really like to buy this and check out the best out of all the writers here. Although if you think about it, everybody ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Tradgedy
Hello,and I hope you've had a nice day and/or evening. This is a really good person for someone your age. Your grammar and vocabulary is truly amazing, and the fact ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Train went over the edge, Pg.2
It had taken me a few more minutes to get to work that day. I had never gone done into the kitchen the night before to get food, my friends ...
Apr 21, 2010
