cthorpe12

thnx peeps! i'll have to write some more. i just think that the term and meaning of immortal can have many things to say about it, that's why i wrote ...

thnx i did that. anybody else want to edit before i make my big changes?

thnx everybody. plz continue with wat ur doin! i love it. i'm fixing the stuff right now. and about the slowness in chapter 1, i'm suprised. ppl were telling me ...