crewgurl93

I just do lyrics. I would sing, but I'm not too sure about it. My firend wanted me to write some songs for her band, so I did! If they ...

idk

my cheese and crackers say it was good. :P

it was okay. I would've changed some stuff, but that's just because I'm wierd... crewgurl

I have only one real comment on this, Crewgurl, and I think it's something you might want to look at as far as characterization goes. If Emma is driving - ...

it's good. i'm not really the best judge of lyrics, though!!

cool

I like it!! The lyrics went GREAT with the music!

Oh! and you say I a bit too much!

It was okay... short for a chapter in a novel. A novel is usually is 40,000-70,000 pages. Maybe you should consider making it a shortstory... unless you do about ten ...

Paramore is pretty good... I like Flyleaf better...

Take in mind that I was being COMPLETLY random and, no, I'm not on crack! Yes, I am a Democrat. My mom is chiar of the Mathews Democrats. Anyway, this ...

Nice! Very funny!

The burns on my arm get better everyday You should hate me now instead of helping me I can be so stupid sometimes I fall to the ground and cry ...

Thanks for your critisism.