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Re: Sorrow
The wolf howls a celestial song of sorrow As the sun preaches a multi-hued farewell. I wait in mourning for night to draw near But all that comes is everlasting ...
Sep 14, 2007 -
Re: No, you DON'T suck. Honest.
Thanks!!! :D
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Copyright Infringment...
Hey, I know no one on here would do this, but what if somebody steals my work and I can't prove it? I just don't want my writing to be ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: Compared
I know the rhyme is screwed up every other stanza and in the last stanza. I meant to do that!!!!! Compared Perfect girl, perfect smile Everything I could never be ...
Sep 2, 2007 -
Re: When to ditch it?
Never stop!
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Please Read This...
Did you know that only three out of a hundred people who start a novel actually finish? And that even less get their work published? Do you know why? Because ...
Aug 31, 2007 -
Re: Real Beauty
This poem is about me and how I feel some people see me. I wrote it while I was doing crew (rowing), because I felt like I didn't belong there. ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: Dreams
Okay, this is about my opinion of dreams. :P And remember, be nice! :smt003 Dreams Dreams are The things we dare, The things we share. Dreams are What we think, ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: Crescent Part Three
Yay! It's here! It's here! The Third Part of Crescent! (BTW: If you haven't read my edits to parts one and two, please do so, because I added some extra ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: Jacob the squirrel
You started pretty good. Basically everybody already said what I was going to say. Finish it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Tab let
Yup. It's the randomness... It strikes again!
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Says who?
You don't have to do anything that you don't want to, unless truely requiered by law of corse. I think what the quote meant, essentially, is that life is going ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
Um... the begining is what caught me. That's good! But the ending... let me put it this way- It. Was. Sad. Keep trying and improve.
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: A New Me
Please critique! It's very much needed! :D Oh, but be nice! A New Me Is this what I really want? A new life? A new me? If that’s what I ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Fickle
I like this. I may try something like that! PEACE
Aug 28, 2007
