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crewgurl93

  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi! I'm new

    Hey, welcome to YWS!!!! Can't wait to see your work! PM me if you want a review! I'll happily give one!

    Nov 11, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: How does writing make you feel?

    Writing makes me feel worth someting. Wow! Just thought of this! The keyboard is my punching bag!

    Nov 11, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hello!

    Hi Jas! Welcome to YWS! Can't wait to start reading! Happy writing! CrewGurl

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: On a Silver Platter

    Huh? Sorry but I don't quite get it...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Abducted

    I agree with Cade... It is really rushed. Maybe a bit forced, also. Just take some time to add more to it. Show us what's going on instead of telling ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Safire's Light

    Sorry for the length... the main reason it's so long was to make my teacher either really mad or really impressed... and also because it definatly requires more than five ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Safire's Light

    I wrote this for an English Honors project. The limit was two to five pages. I wrote sixteen. Everybody else in my class went for three. The only reason I'm ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: That doesn't hurt

    I like it. I think the only bad part to me was the first stanza. Yeah, it really didn't do much for me. But other wise, this poem was lovely. ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Face in the Mirror

    This poem is very deep in meaning to me. Some of you might not understand, but others of you will. All I have to say is that the meaning behind ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: Tomorrow

    I really like the concept of this poem. I do. The title 'Tomorrow' is what really caught me. The word represents a feeling of the forgetting of mistakes and leaving ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Survival

    Okay. I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me! "Pull over here, I'm hungry." "Joe's has good pasta" "Fine then, you know your way around here better ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • Welcome Mat Re: How's Life?

    Hey y'all it's the chica from another universe. I'm back. Little 'Crescent' update for any one interested: The title 'Crescent' has been changed to, well, 'Changed'! My word count is ...

    Nov 10, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The boy who never grew up

    I like the idea of this, really good for a first story. It would appear as though everyone has already said what I was going to. No point in bombarding ...

    Sep 30, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Compared

    I mean, it really sucks! Dang...

    Sep 29, 2007
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Compared

    God. Why did I write this crap again???

    Sep 29, 2007


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