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Re: Hi! I'm new
Hey, welcome to YWS!!!! Can't wait to see your work! PM me if you want a review! I'll happily give one!
Nov 11, 2007 -
Re: How does writing make you feel?
Writing makes me feel worth someting. Wow! Just thought of this! The keyboard is my punching bag!
Nov 11, 2007 -
Re: Hello!
Hi Jas! Welcome to YWS! Can't wait to start reading! Happy writing! CrewGurl
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: On a Silver Platter
Huh? Sorry but I don't quite get it...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Abducted
I agree with Cade... It is really rushed. Maybe a bit forced, also. Just take some time to add more to it. Show us what's going on instead of telling ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Safire's Light
Sorry for the length... the main reason it's so long was to make my teacher either really mad or really impressed... and also because it definatly requires more than five ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Safire's Light
I wrote this for an English Honors project. The limit was two to five pages. I wrote sixteen. Everybody else in my class went for three. The only reason I'm ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: That doesn't hurt
I like it. I think the only bad part to me was the first stanza. Yeah, it really didn't do much for me. But other wise, this poem was lovely. ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Face in the Mirror
This poem is very deep in meaning to me. Some of you might not understand, but others of you will. All I have to say is that the meaning behind ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Tomorrow
I really like the concept of this poem. I do. The title 'Tomorrow' is what really caught me. The word represents a feeling of the forgetting of mistakes and leaving ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: Survival
Okay. I haven't done this in a while, so bear with me! "Pull over here, I'm hungry." "Joe's has good pasta" "Fine then, you know your way around here better ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: How's Life?
Hey y'all it's the chica from another universe. I'm back. Little 'Crescent' update for any one interested: The title 'Crescent' has been changed to, well, 'Changed'! My word count is ...
Nov 10, 2007 -
Re: The boy who never grew up
I like the idea of this, really good for a first story. It would appear as though everyone has already said what I was going to. No point in bombarding ...
Sep 30, 2007 -
Re: Compared
I mean, it really sucks! Dang...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Compared
God. Why did I write this crap again???
Sep 29, 2007
