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crescentgaia

  • Art & Photography Re: Butterfly

    Oh that's pretty! I love the coloring that you did and the shape of the body to the wings. It looks very real. Did you do the background as well ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Quarterback

    So - I liked this. I like the fact that it's fun and quirky and that we don't really know the fate of the quarterback in the bottle. I also ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ecstasy - An exercise in simile and metaphor

    He enters the room like a king, pulling towards a linen paradise. Their lovemaking is like the parting of the sea. Hot as the zenith. Tiring as apathy. Waves of ...

    Jun 28, 2010
  • General Articles Re: deleted

    I dunno - I really liked the movie. I waited until it was on DVD and didn't see it in the theaters. The White Queen fit with being insane, as ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Let us have hats and be Mad Hatters. :D

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Rain

    Hey AutumnSun. Your poem is very nice. It has good imagery but it feels too much like a blob of text. You need punctuation and breaks in the stanza. I'm ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1 wish

    The wish to live without fear, is a wish that seems so mear. I love this little part. It is my favorite part of the entire poem. You've taken, in ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Well.... :twisted: Maybe just once or twice. You got me on this zombie thing. Or I got you on it. Either way, we're all mad.

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Meep! *is glomped* I hope so. Otherwise you're in for it. ;) Ooo Elephant! *hugs it* It shall be my Squishy.

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Hi! I'm Liz/crescentgaia and I'm a bit shy about making intros. I'd just like to say that Tatra got me over here and it's all her fault. I'm probably going ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: With Eyes Alone

    I agree with the comments about the stanzas needing to flow better. It does feel like a bit of a jerky movement or like gasping for breath. yes, i've finally ...

    Jun 27, 2010


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind