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crescentgaia

  • Art & Photography Re: Butterfly

    Oh that's pretty! I love the coloring that you did and the shape of the body to the wings. It looks very real. Did you do the background as well ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Quarterback

    So - I liked this. I like the fact that it's fun and quirky and that we don't really know the fate of the quarterback in the bottle. I also ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Ecstasy - An exercise in simile and metaphor

    He enters the room like a king, pulling towards a linen paradise. Their lovemaking is like the parting of the sea. Hot as the zenith. Tiring as apathy. Waves of ...

    Jun 28, 2010
  • General Articles Re: deleted

    I dunno - I really liked the movie. I waited until it was on DVD and didn't see it in the theaters. The White Queen fit with being insane, as ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Let us have hats and be Mad Hatters. :D

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Rain

    Hey AutumnSun. Your poem is very nice. It has good imagery but it feels too much like a blob of text. You need punctuation and breaks in the stanza. I'm ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: 1 wish

    The wish to live without fear, is a wish that seems so mear. I love this little part. It is my favorite part of the entire poem. You've taken, in ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Well.... :twisted: Maybe just once or twice. You got me on this zombie thing. Or I got you on it. Either way, we're all mad.

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Meep! *is glomped* I hope so. Otherwise you're in for it. ;) Ooo Elephant! *hugs it* It shall be my Squishy.

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: *looks out nervously* Hello...

    Hi! I'm Liz/crescentgaia and I'm a bit shy about making intros. I'd just like to say that Tatra got me over here and it's all her fault. I'm probably going ...

    Jun 27, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: With Eyes Alone

    I agree with the comments about the stanzas needing to flow better. It does feel like a bit of a jerky movement or like gasping for breath. yes, i've finally ...

    Jun 27, 2010


Well, if I can't get this chapter to work....at least I will have exercised my fingers.
— Kaia