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Very heartfelt and well-spoken. I'm sure your friend will love this poem! It is so true that words are just too limited to describe all of our complex feelings and ...

:P Now that I've actually comprehended what the story means, I shall give you a review. I like how this is very thought provoking, like a riddle. The colors and ...

The shopping district was gloomy and only its lights made its sufferable. Typo. You added an extra "s" in "its".

I really like the quote. :)

Okay, I like what you have here. The letter thing works, but I really think you should change the title and John's name. If you aren't already aware of this, ...

I really liked the way you did this with the different quotes and all. He takes a deep breath, his throats gone dry *throat's He doesn't have multiple throats. Throat's=throat ...

I like how you did the red. It was very unique. I thought this would be a sappy cliche love poem when I first saw the title. I'm glad it ...

I'm not from Australia, but I know they use different terminology for some things. E.g. Door handles are called door furniture there.

Okay, so this a pretty neat little prologue you have here. I'm hooked. I'm looking forward to discovering why the King kept the baby, essentially the baby's significance. Some, however, ...

I guess this is an okay beginning. Nothing exciting has really happened. Yet. There isn't anything "messed up" that I can sense in this first chapter, but I'm pretty confident ...

I'm not much of a poetry reviewer, but I feel that this is really cliche. It reminds me of several songs. You could add some personal touches to the poem. ...

I was trolling on Inkpop the other day, another writing site, and found this great collection of links on the pros and cons of publishing online. Here, why don't you ...

This is indeed an interesting idea to ponder on. I like your comparison of humans to cars. There are, however, a few grammatical errors but that can be easily fixed. ...

Hahaha. You made me laugh. This was a clever twist. Very original. Confetti did a pretty decent job with the nitpicks, so I won't say anything about them. I don't ...

I like your shading a ton. The clothing looks really 3-D, like it's popping out at me. Your drawing is almost like a picture of an animated manga person. Keep ...