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We walked down the trail that we walked everyday together. I smiled as you held my hand and started messing with your hair as you always did when you get ...

Every time I try to escape I am pulled back down further, like an invisible force grabbing at my ankles , tugging me further and further, driving me to madness ...

LIES. We all write everyday. I'm " writing " this post right now. You wrote those words on your facebook status. You wrote the words in your comment. You wrote ...

This is beautiful. It's a very original and heartfelt love poem. (Not here to review)

Okay. So this is for school, correct? I suggest you post the prompt here too, so people can see if you're addressing the issues you're supposed to. I like your ...

I wrote this a while ago, and I honesty don't know what category it falls under. This type of insanity is new to me, incomprehensible. The light dances off his ...

"What did you do Matt ," she squealed. Comma before Matt. Matthew looked at her, mirroring her look of horror. You already said look. "Tell here !" Lacy hissed. *her ...

The teacher said the list of names outloud, but mine was never mention twice. *mentioned "Said" is in past tense so "mention" should be too. I got home frowning and ...

When you donate points to someone, will they be notified that so and so sent them points or do the points just transfer over without anyone knowing you sent them?

Hello. This is an interesting piece you have here. I haven't seen many works about dwarves, so congrats on that. Overall, the grammar and writing was decent, but there were ...

Nothings worth the end. *Nothing's Nothing is Cause when you have a problem * 'Cause Cause means like I'm doing this for a good cause. The way you're using "cause" ...

This is for Tabbygirl's contest. I had to write a story with a magic goblet and a demon in it. Envy followed the human girl. She was a good girl, ...

I like the concept of your poem novel, but like mentioned previously, there are grammatical errors that need to be corrected. You can definitely write, but you may want to ...

Can I just say I'm jealous? You make everything so life-like. Great contrast and shading. *runs away and hides from awesomeness*

This was for the Big Random Story contest, so I don't know if I'm allowed to edit it and I have exactly 1000 words. :/